I asked people for their opinions on my film. I explained my idea and listened to the feedback they gave me. 30% of these people were a mixture of genders and ages outside of my target audience (young teen and adults). The adults all liked the idea it was relatable - they'd all been through something similar. 70% of these people fit into my target audience (young adults). Most said they liked the idea and the whole film being her thoughts sounds interesting and unique. One said she always wonders what people are thinking when watching films and wish they could get into their head. This gives her the perfect opportunity to just that. Someone I asked in my target audience said he liked the idea and thinks it will be successful. However, he said he feels like there needs to be a plot twist and something dramatic needs to happen, for example, she see's him and realised he lied about being busy.
I took this idea and decided that I agreed. From the feedback I decided there needed to be a bigger ending as without it might get boring hearing her thoughts about why he's not there for 4/5 minutes. I decided to have my last scene as my main character leaving the cinema and as she walks down the road she see's her date with another girl. We will then see her face and thoughts toward this situation. It makes the film a bit more exiting.
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